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You left me here and ran away
You were scared, you did not see
The overture was on, death's play
I was deserted! Another me?
You left me here with this stamp
To a concerto beyond any astral limit
Your whiff was blowing on my lamp
I was abandoned! You believe it!
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:iconaaapi:
nice job!
..and no, poetry cannot come naturally to me.

welll, it does. floats through the window, spits out of the shadows..

just rarely.
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~Brici5 Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
well it is important to keep writing and eventually inspiration will visit you easier and easier
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:iconaaapi:
alright, thanks for the tip :D
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~Brici5 Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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~MajesticLlamas Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This was really quite phenomenal. I'm also doing the 100 poem challenge! I started today, but I'm looking forward to really writing. Is it difficult to stay with?
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~Brici5 Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think it is pretty easy and fun to write these :D
I enjoy doing it!

and thank you very much for the kind comment! :)
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