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7. Heaven

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Restless souls and spirits, centurions of time
All take shelter and prepare; journeys there are to be made
Drums sound with great intensity, timpani will chime
With hardship through the stars, they all shall wade
To reach the Eden, the Heaven, a place devoid of crime
A place where light beckons and nightmares whine
Heaven does exist.
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NitzanHavoc's avatar
The poem in itself is beautiful, but the last line feels a little anti-climatic... the rhyming isn't accurate and it's hard to feel positive "heavenly" vibes while reading the word "whine", even if it's the nightmares... just my humble opinion :)