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I'm lost between worlds of paradise and beyond,
Striving for eternity to find and bath in life's pond.
I hesitated and I lost myself
Desperate, doomed, eidolon of thyself.

I feel so numb in the inside,
My pain and wounds bring out this tide
Of blood, of hate,
Rains of the dead
(This Armageddon of the sad)

You heal me in my deepest despair,
You feel my aura with the freshest air.
You hold me tight, give me your kiss,
Enchanting my presence with your golden bliss.

I feel so numb in the inside,
Open up your wings so wide
For tomorrow, to the end,
As time shall for forever stand
(This hourglass of blood and sand)

My heart is the contraption of tormented souls
Like a banshee empowered by the deathly howls.
I got numb in the inside,
I've lost so much, I've lost my mind.

I feel so numb in the inside,
Yelling out this line with pride.
Run away, stay away!
There's nothing left that you should say.

I will decay time
I will take what's mine
I shall set the bones afire,
Burning bodies on the pyre.

I feel so mad in the inside,
My words are dying on my side
My love's no more, the pain is gone
I died once but here I come.

I feel so dead in the inside…
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Molybdenum-Blues Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
A powerful poem. I especially like the line "This hourglass of blood and sand". Well done!
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Brici5 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :) I'm glad you like it!!
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marianicole7898 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
It's great i have a poem called Numb lol
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Brici5 Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! :D coincidences then! :))
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marianicole7898 Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lol your welcome and yeah :D but it's not as good
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Brici5 Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you're too kind!
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marianicole7898 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lol i guess :D
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student Writer
It's got such a light rhythm to it, but the words are rather heavy. The contrast between the two is nice =)
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Brici5 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, this contrast was one of the ways I took in writing this, I'm glad you like the poem! :)
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student Writer
I'm glad I like it too! =D It's always nice to read something well-written.
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